Wow, I really loved your poem! The imagery you created with “green mist” and “autumn petals” is so enchanting. I was struck by how you captured the contrast between beauty and pain, “salty scars” and “deep cut fissures.” It feels like a powerful exploration of transformation and resilience. The way you portray the ethereal woman dancing yet ultimately disappearing into darkness is hauntingly beautiful. Your language flows so well, and it lingers in my mind. Thank you for sharing 💛
Your words mean so much to me. 💕 It was like this one just wanted to be written. Total flow. When I started writing it, I had a different idea of how it would be. But it seemed to have its own idea of being.
I feel this...and there is a darkness before and beyond the light that is not evil, but is of womb, of God, of love, of no-thing. The love-light fully embraced dissolves back into it and arises from it. I love your poem - it speaks of how the light itself bursts forth to return us to origin, even through our most acute scars and pain, always breaking for the light and returning us Home. There is a prayer in The Sophia Code called the prayer of the Divine Mother: "Divine Mother of All Life, Take me to that place deep within your womb where I can know no-thing and be reborn anew." It is at the very beginning, before chapter 1. <3
Thank you, love. 🫶 This one cake straight from my heart and it means so much to me that you can relate to it. 💛 The prayer is awesome. Thank you for sharing. 💛
I love how ethereal and atmospheric this is. The pulsation of waves and salt. So so good!!
Thank you so much for your words. 🙏 This poem came feine deep inside. 🖤🖤
Oh goodness!!!! You are slaying me in the best possible way! 🖤🔥🖤 hauntingly beautiful sister.
Thank you so much, lovely! 🙏🫶🫶🫶
Wow, I really loved your poem! The imagery you created with “green mist” and “autumn petals” is so enchanting. I was struck by how you captured the contrast between beauty and pain, “salty scars” and “deep cut fissures.” It feels like a powerful exploration of transformation and resilience. The way you portray the ethereal woman dancing yet ultimately disappearing into darkness is hauntingly beautiful. Your language flows so well, and it lingers in my mind. Thank you for sharing 💛
Your words mean so much to me. 💕 It was like this one just wanted to be written. Total flow. When I started writing it, I had a different idea of how it would be. But it seemed to have its own idea of being.
So many beautiful words and feeling in such a short phone. Loved it.
Thank you so much for reading and for your kind words. 🙏🫶💛
Was supposed to say poem, not phone sorry
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so lovely. Enjoyed the sensory imagery :)
Thank you so much! 🙏💛🫶
I feel this...and there is a darkness before and beyond the light that is not evil, but is of womb, of God, of love, of no-thing. The love-light fully embraced dissolves back into it and arises from it. I love your poem - it speaks of how the light itself bursts forth to return us to origin, even through our most acute scars and pain, always breaking for the light and returning us Home. There is a prayer in The Sophia Code called the prayer of the Divine Mother: "Divine Mother of All Life, Take me to that place deep within your womb where I can know no-thing and be reborn anew." It is at the very beginning, before chapter 1. <3
Thank you, love. 🫶 This one cake straight from my heart and it means so much to me that you can relate to it. 💛 The prayer is awesome. Thank you for sharing. 💛
Blessings and love! I am so grateful to have been able to receive it so fully! Thank you!
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this is stunning 🥺❤️
Thank you so much, my heart is in it. ❤️
Comment as often as you like. I appreciate each one of your comments. 😁
Thank you! 🙏🫶💛
Thank you so much reading and for your kind words! 🙏🫶💛
Thank you. 🙏
Wow, thank you. 🙏 If publishing comes my way I’ll definitely take hold. 😁
Thank you so much! 🫶🫶🫶